unfinnished mess!

[adam73]

ok so i cant sing, pretty bad at recording, but im trying

[j03]

Hey, I like this a lot! Very catchy. Sounds good with a lo-fi Iggy Pop kinda sound. I think the vocals could be a little louder though. Any maybe the guitar solo is a little flashy compared to the rest of the song?

Good song though.

[adam73]

thank you j03 much appreciated man i put the vocals low because im a bit wary of my singing i also agree that the guitar solo could be simplified, but thanks for the positive comment man adam fagan on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Videos

[Btonning]

Dude, I think your being way hard on yourself.. It's a very catchy song. I like it alot.. And I think your vocals suit the song great.. I've heard a lot worse singers for sure! So turn em up a little bit and let the guitar rip man..
The guitar work is excellent too btw..

[adam73]

thank you for your kind words Btonning much appreciated man

[Sonicfrog]

Love It!!! Especially the odd choppy guitar. Whatever you do, this needs to stay raw like it is. Keep the flavor.

[fHumble fHingaz]

This is very cool...I absolutely love it - very off-kilter & edgy, but catchy as swine 'flu...great vibe! BTW, there's an old saying "If you can't sing, sing LOUD!" (if you can sing, sing louder!) Turn those vocals UP!

[adam73]

huge thank you sonicfrog and fHumble fHingaz for your really positive comments, i guess i half expected it to get laughed at, so am really surpised by the good feedback also i tip my hat to you fHumble fHingaz i just checked out your sound click page and they're brilliant tunes man

[fHumble fHingaz]

Thanks adam - If this is a sample of your stuff, I look forward to more stuff from you.