new song took a break blah!

[burnyourflags]

doing the vocals for this one this week,i should have 2 in the finished section finally ya.fun!wu hu.oh im taking out a lot of the kick in the middle of the song.its to much.and thats it ok ..

[rockerdude]

This song rocks! The intro was a little long,what if you just cut that out and just started it out rockin at 1:02 mmmmmmmmmm....

I really like your guitar playing and your writing style,I'm a fan!
This sounds very big and mixed well.
The transition part at 1:44 was pure magic.The piano notes were haunting and very moving.
The things I don't like: The fake drums sounding fake,you programed very well but the feel just aint there.
The guitar tones were big and heavy but a little fizzy with a hint of freshly sliced buzz but thats subjective.

Overall some of the better stuff on here,I would like to hear this stuff recorded in a Pro studio with real musicians to back you up, That would be HUGE!

Your playing has a raw energy and passion that cuts through and I can feel it.
That's what sets this above the norm.

[mikewell]

Awesome flags !!! I like the intro to this and the piano really makes the track. Another good job, can't wait to hear the vocals !!!

[burnyourflags]

Originally Posted by rockerdude

This song rocks! The intro was a little long,what if you just cut that out and just started it out rockin at 1:02 mmmmmmmmmm....

I really like your guitar playing and your writing style,I'm a fan!
This sounds very big and mixed well.
The transition part at 1:44 was pure magic.The piano notes were haunting and very moving.
The things I don't like: The fake drums sounding fake,you programed very well but the feel just aint there.
The guitar tones were big and heavy but a little fizzy with a hint of freshly sliced buzz but thats subjective.

Overall some of the better stuff on here,I would like to hear this stuff recorded in a Pro studio with real musicians to back you up, That would be HUGE!

Your playing has a raw energy and passion that cuts through and I can feel it.
That's what sets this above the norm.

wow man thnx.yea i dont know what to do with the intro,it drags i know.and thnx to a few senior members including you i have been doing more homework on velocity and automation looking in to better programming.i wish i could get a band and pro studio man.where im from noone really likes what im doing.thnx man,im a dreamer though! so, its hard making any of the writing i do reality.

[burnyourflags]

Originally Posted by mikewell

Awesome flags !!! I like the intro to this and the piano really makes the track. Another good job, can't wait to hear the vocals !!!

yea the vocals,i know.im gonna put a finished song up this week,and i tried everything everyone told me i got rid of most of the proccessing and auto tuner,but,with the makeshift stuff im stuck with($$$).its the best i can get right now.i put so much emotion,and dreams of doing something real in music,that im just on a roller coaster with it.i almost quit all of it.so,believe me your responses are the last inspirations for me.yea im on the pitty poor me pot right now,sorry.so youve made my day :

[awaken1]

yet another catchy riff by flags! I'll be looking forward to when your album comes out..the colors you paint with really create some new information..

[burnyourflags]

Originally Posted by awaken1

yet another catchy riff by flags! I'll be looking forward to when your album comes out..the colors you paint with really create some new information..

thnx again everybody i cant express how much you guys have helped me.knowledge and experience is priceless.im gonna post 2 songs here later.1,is one of the first songs i recorded 9 months ago and the 2nd will be where im at now,and with all the help and knowledge this site has given me.its almost embarrassing.but, the dif.will be very noticible.and now the only thing im worried about is hopefully when i finish the vocals i wont loose anything or anyone,and ive tried to find singers the last 9 months even via the internet but, i dont know if anyones been that interested,i would love to have other people involved from anywhere,considering we have the tech.and capabilities these days.so, on that note if anyones interested in just adding some ideas shoot em.thnx awaken,rocker,wells,and fhumblez,and others youguys rock.