Its been a while.... But I have a new acoustic song!

[pokepanda1]

This is a rough mix with compression on vocals and the guitar. There is reverb on both as well but there is no EQ on anything. Levels arent exact I just wanted to see if you guys could give me some feedback.

ps the song isnt alllll the way done but if you have some suggestions on something we could do in the end would help as well!

Thanks in advance!

[paul999]

Nice playing. Good sound. Good singing. There is a bit of the nose plugged sound at times. Great lyric's. I like how you play the guitars off each other from time to time.

[awaken1]

Duuuude! This no less worthy then Howie Day, Damien Rice, or others in this genre. The only thing I can find wrong with it at the moment is the vocals..which are done very well, but like stated above seems like you might have been coming on with a cold or something..or maybe you're holding back at times or something.. You have almost the same emotion in the chorus' as you do the verses..open up in the chorus more and own those words! they're great words, need to "feel" it more..great melody and hook, you've got em hooked, now just real em in!

exellent guitar sound and playing, no need to even go there.

I think the ending is fine, maybe not repeating it twice.

It's always nice to hear something that is relatively simple with a lot of depth.
Nice work!

one last thing, the line "hoping for a summer" be careful with the "P" in hoping..

[burnyourflags]

great song its nice to here some good music here every once and a while.ill master that for free.drop me a line.seriously.

[pokepanda1]

Originally Posted by burnyourflags

great song its nice to here some good music here every once and a while.ill master that for free.drop me a line.seriously.

I sent you a private message about it.



Btw thanks to everyone else for the feedback