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Old 12-20-2008, 09:58 PM
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First post, first Christmas song. Be genle!

I wrote and recorded this for my Mother, who is having a rough time this Christmas.

Title: Be A Light


Be_A_Light.mp3

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Be A Light 2.mp3

Lyrics:
It's been a long, lonely December
[The] whole year's been a mess as well.
Looking for the Joy this season
I've been missing out, can't you tell?

What have we got this Christmas time?
You've got yours, and I've got mine.
You've got yours, and I've got mine.

I may need just a litlte light, to help me see;
Help me see.
Come on reach out! We still got time to believe.
To believe.

Although your heart is filled with sorrow
Just know the Lord is not to blame.
And when you lift your eyes up to heaven
Just pray the Lord calls you by name.

[He'll say] I don't see winners or losers;
I just see how you play the game.

Christmas lights are all around this town.
I know you won't let me down.


You may need jsut a little light.
You'll believe. You'll belive.

Reach out, be a light for Christmas
I believe (repeat)
Oh holy night (repeat)
Reach out, be a light on Christmas
I will be your light, for Christmas
Reach out, be a light on Christmas
Reach out, be a light
Reach out be a light
On Chrismas

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Old 12-22-2008, 08:36 PM
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I think there is a conflict between the electric guitar and the vocals. They are fighting and it's tough to know which one is supposed to be dominant.

The vocals sound great!

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Old 12-22-2008, 09:00 PM
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I'll work that out. Thank you.
 

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