Sharp Tongues with Full Lungs

[rourkeman4]

This is a song I wrote on Logic. I don't know how I can improve the quality of it, so that is why I am asking you all for some help. Also, the levels show up just perfect on Logic, but I feel like this song is innately low in volume. I would also like to make it clearer.

Also feel free to critique the song!

I really appreciate all of the help.

Best,

Pat

[danielvds]

Really interesting modern unique sound. Possibly too much reverb, its drowning out the drums and the rest of the mix. Coming along nicely, however if you just save it as something else and do a complete re-level, re-pan, re-level, it will sound miles better. I reckon the drums should be a tad louder and possibly build up more, maybe with a volume automation to help this along. I'm liking the concoction of synths Good stuff. I'd buy this.

[line6gigety1]

hey! u should layer that snare with something a little thicker sounding make urself a new track hold option drag down to new track. go thru your studio toolkit find something nice. maybe try compressing that bass a little before u go thru any amp designer or try taking some distortion off of it. once all this is done bounce it down to your stereo track open it up in a new logic project and master this to bring more volume out of it. good luck you got a good start.

[rourkeman4]

thanks a lot for the tips! will do! i will keep you updated for sure.