organic

[paulwalshmusic]

a more organic approach, no samples, just soft synths and midi keyboard.
please bash

[fature]

Personally I feel like you've thrown too many ideas into one track. I got lost listening to it and eventually lost interest.

The first section up until 1min (ish) is a bit crazy sounding for me, I get the paranoid feeling your trying to create though, perhaps choosing another patch would have worked better imho.

The second section is better for me.

Perhaps work on your structure and where you want the track to end up, also keep in mind that music has to flow, if it starts and stops all the time you loose the listener.

Regards,
Lee.