iphone game music, is this any good?

[ReasonFreak]

So i was recently hired on to an iphone gig, writing music for games this company puts out (sorry no-can tell, nondisclosure agreement )

so anyway, heres the rough cut, what do you think? its supposed to be aimed toward a younger demographic, the instructions i recieved were as such; It must be complex to the ear, yet relaxing, and also be accesible to children.

its pretty challenging actually, anyway bash away!

[pablo.station]

Can you upload it here or stream it via a link? You have it saved as an MP4 in the folder and I don't wanna download it...

[DarrenH]

Hi.

I really like this piece.

Shame it's only very short.

I wasn't that keen on the tamberine voice, but that's just my preference, I like realistic sounding percussive sounds.

I also think the bass track is a little too far forward.

Extend the track and make it a stand alone number, I'd buy it.

Cheers
Darren