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Old 03-07-2009, 09:42 AM
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Here is the new track for the song "I Believe" that was my collaboration with Russian rock band Fish Moon (Fish-Moon on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Videos)

It is probably the only remix where I mixed both Russian and English languages. The vocals are amazing! My job was to make a decent electro house remix and I hope you will like what you hear!

Otherwise, feel free to criticize this track (I may still be able to fix it before the release date)

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Old 03-09-2009, 09:52 PM
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I'm a trancehead myself, so a bit out of my element, but...

I like what you've got going in the track.

The vocals sound clean and appropriately mixed with the instrumental track (vox may be a bit loud out of my speakers, but less of a problem out of club monitors).

The production work of the music is danceable, not overly complicated and muddied, and catchy.

If you're satisfied with the way the recording turned out, I think you've got something complete that you can be proud of.

Cheers!
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Dance is not my favorite genre of electronic music, so I can't really comment on the composition, but like substratus said, I can picture people dancing on this song. To me, it sounds as good as most of the dance or techno music that the pros put out. Good job.
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Hey good work here! The vocals are very clean! Good job bringing up the song to the drop where you start up the electro elements.

Here I found your bass/lead wasn't dirty enough, it didn't stand out as much as I'd expect from an electro tune. The synth sounds like a trance saw that you tried to morph into an electro sound.

That was about the only thing that stood out to me. Otherwise there are a lot of good creative elements that mix well together in here. Really good work with the vocals! Keep it up!
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Good point Zaporzan!

Bass line may need a little fix (replacement would be great I think).

This track has not been released yet, so I still have a chance to play around.

Thank you for your input everyone!
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double the vocal hook with a track with an interesting filter for the hook, maybe? its so powerful, but it sounds a little hollow. put a quiet, highly reverbed or echo on it...the lower pitched layer there is now would work for this, too, but you would need to increase the volume on it to a little bit.

I LOVE THIS SONG THOUGH!! TIGHT!!
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