Distant Lovers (feedback wanted)

[Nibert Mensing]

Hi.

My second track in here. Please bash away

Zippyshare.com - Distant Lovers.mp3

Where can I improve it?

[ryanjonrage]

Originally Posted by Nibert Mensing

Hi.

My second track in here. Please bash away

Zippyshare.com - Distant Lovers.mp3

Where can I improve it?

I like the feel of the song.
The strings don't seem like they're matching up with the song too well.
The vocals are strong on their own, but with the music, I don't know if It's the notes that you're hitting, or something else, but I think you could probably put a better track down if you moved the notes that your singing down a bit in pitch.

All around, seems like it would be a pretty solid song, good work!

[Nibert Mensing]

Thanks a lot for the feedback.. I can hear the vox are a bit off. I will work on that.. And maybe your right with the strings.. It can be more harmonic to fit the song.. Well, back in the studio

[ryanjonrage]

Looking forward to hear what comes of it!

[mjaquiery]

It seems a little odd... The quality of the music is very good.. - professional in fact.. Sounds like its been mastered by a professional too... However, the lyrics and there melody do not fit with the background music.. They are in a different key...
Are you sure you made this song? Its very strange that someone who is so good aat making nice professional sounds would make such a simple mistake like adding out of tune lyrics? R u sure u didn't mix two togther?