Bash this song

[fidelitas88]

Hey guys, just wanted to get your opinion on a new project i completed. bash away homeys. Wasn't sure if this is necessarily qualified as "electronic" but its instrumental. hope you guys enjoy. thanks.

[roysboy]

This is a really ambitious effort ...full marks for that . Its quite a beautiful theme .
I think the acoustic guitar may have to come down in the mix a tad ....just a tad though . I also think the different instruments seem to be fighting each other for attention and I'm aching to hear a bigger kik drum sound . Overall , I 'm inclined to suggest that you mix it with a few more dynamics...some real nice soft interludes and then a nice dynamic lift in ther simewhere ,....you get the idea ...a bit more space in it ...maybe the kit drops out and comes in fuller ?...Just brainstorming here. Good stuff though .......hang in

[fidelitas88]

yeah i get what your saying about all the different parts competing with each other and the acoustic guitar in the beginning definately didn't come in the best way. I appreciate your comments and your time in listening to my piece. I hope to progress better and better with each song. Thanks =).