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Old 06-26-2009, 04:41 AM
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Venus Power is my 1st track from my upcoming album - Golden Lights.

Track conceived and sequenced on GEM - WK4 arranger keyboards. Additional voices (Pan flute) included from Roland JV1080 synth module.

Your opinion regarding the quality of recording, mixing and effects.. please

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Old 06-27-2009, 08:39 PM
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Sometimes it sounds like it could use more keyboard tracks. Sounds pretty good, but not fully professional (I'm not saying I sound fully professional either).
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If the song began after your break about 2:50, I think you have a really great idea! For me prior to that, the percussion and synth bass was not enough to keep me listening with the pan flute, let me rephrase that, I mean the ear got tired. But the additional sequenced parts after the break, really brought out the groove from there on. I would mix some or bring out more of that in the beginning. The ending, perhaps cliche' but adequate. I might search for a different way out. Just my humble opinion!

Thanks for posting!

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I really like this track. Mix is fine as far as I can tell. The only issue I have is with the lead instrument. That syth pan flute needs to be more - I don't know - Breathey? Like if you recorded it live you would hear the musician breathing - sorry don't know how you would do that. Is there enough happenning just before the break. Like the end crash - more top there?
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I like the beat man, I do have to agree that from around 2:50 on really brings the groove together, seemed like I was waiting for some words though. Cool song altogether.
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