My Pain

[Strange.Axemaster]

original song called My Pain its a simple song

[jjb]

Nice song and guitar work. I'd guess you consider yourself a guitarist who also sings. I say that because you "hid" your voice under echo/reverb. From what I heard, your voice is pretty good. I'd suggest getting rid of the echo/reverb effect (at least mosts of it) and consider other vocal enhancers (like multiple voice tracks with some delay in each). The song is definitely worth refining, and would benefit from the introduction of bass guitar and/or drums around mid-way.

jjb

[Husky Band]

I like the song and I wish you hadn't added all of the fx to your voice, they mask the emotional effect your voice and words have. This song needs a simple straight forward approach as I feel its' message is that strong.

[Strange.Axemaster]

No FX i dont sing I write and play now youll see I want a killer band but no 1 here plays if they do there in a band I only try to sing cause thats the only way for someome to hear my music

[Husky Band]

I like this much better but, the vocal is getting buried by the guitar now. Crank up the vocal a bit.

[Strange.Axemaster]

I just re sung it and drinking Bud select so here is me trying to do what you guy's say took out the bass and FX and redid the vocals much louder PS I hate hearing my voice but screw it now youll see the horrer in it i need a singer I got 60 originals that smoke this I play at the fire when every bodys F"d up

[Husky Band]

I find your voice charming and honest. I don't like my recorded voice either but, I've learned to accept that others do. I'd like to hear the song without all the doubling on the voice and guitar. Just for S&G.

[Strange.Axemaster]

I paned the guitar 100 right track 1 then played it again on track 2 paned 100 left then mastered the mix 70/70 cause someone said the stereo was to wide so its not Dabbled its 2 guitars I'll try to play another track more exact I have another alternate guitar part that sounds really good but its not complete also vocal harmonies that sound good but its a work in progress I appreciate the help

[Strange.Axemaster]

HUSKY have you heard this one just leave give my some advice on this one

[Husky Band]

Well now, that's not exactly country now is it. Pretty well put together song and not bad balance for this type of music. It needs a bass player (that's what I play) What are you using for drums?