Tiger Woods- please listen thank you

[-CMTw-]

Still working. Have a listen at, myspace
it's called Tiger Woods (What Yo) Thanks

Colin M. on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Videos

[edub357]

Originally Posted by -CMTw-

Still working. Have a listen at, myspace
it's called Tiger Woods (What Yo) Thanks

Colin M. on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Videos

Hmmm? Well how do i start this? ok first things first welcome to the site, with that being said, the tiger woods song? im a little confused with the direction your going with it, i could say that the rap itself could use more complex structure, rhyming isnt just saying sam and am if you get what im saying. If your passionate about hip hop, well thats questionable? I listened briefly to god did it and i was thrown back alittle. Is this the type of music you are in to or are you just putting "music" out there? I actually like the beat for god did it but again the vocals need work. Music can impact alot of people even if its not the type of genre there used to listening too, If you take sterotypes out of it and listen to the words and the message being delivered its all the same. Keep at it and if this is what you want to do you will only improve in time. again welcome to the site.

[pablo.station]

It sounds like some Sage Francis type stuff. I'm not sure if that's what your going for but if so than your on your way. The words are interesting but the singing parts need more work. Again if that's what u like than cool. Keep on working..

>>peace<<