new 2 this but bash away

[godmami804]

This is my first mix and love song by myself so I need other ears to judge the whole project. I think its too much reverb and the strings r 2 loud in the chorus, but then again I"m never satified.

[frshtrx]

just my opinion - maybe the bells at 1:10 are a little loud or out front of the vocal?
I like the piano in the first half, it compliments the rap nicely
nice work

[rockerdude]

bobby and whitney.......lol.......bells are a little loud.I think it needs a nice female phrase melody like a repeating chours through it Like "I want It all" or somthing to break up the flo a little.The backing track needs to more intresting and less repeating.Cool track.

[bxx32]

I've heard something like this before-Something by Eminem it's like When I'm Gone

[paulwalshmusic]

Agree with the bells being too loud, I think this is partly because there is a lack of high frequency generally in the rest of mix. Maybe experiment with adding a bit of high freq to the other parts of the mix (start with vocal), turn bells down.

The voice has got a very likeable quality and should be pushed to the front more, could also do with another change(chorus) to add variety

On a second listen I think the voice is even better, which is the most important bit. The song could just do with a bit more work on the arrangement and mix.

Well done

paul

[godmami804]

Thanks 4 the advice. I agree with everyone. Its my 1st love type song and mix so I'm happy I wasnt bashed that hard lol yall rock lol

[edub357]

I agree with he strings being alittle to loud compared to the overall mix but have you thought of using some adlibs to bright'n up your vocals? I like talkin in between my "dead"spots in my verses to add depth. overall good work it will only get better(at least thats what i tell myself!) keep it up..