My new cocky ass song haha "Gems Like Me"

[renschen21]

Let me know what you think.

Also check out my other tracks at

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[bxx32]

One of the Hottest Instrumentals i've heard all day-It is really professional. The lyrics could make this a ton better then it is though. I think you should work on them, if you want a recording that would in fact stand up to stuff on mainstream hip-hop stations. If you guys are just having fun though that's fine-It is pretty hot. I can see you really know how to bust out a rap!

[renschen21]

Do u mean the lyrics aren't good enough? Or that they don't sound professional enough, as in quality wise? Also...this track was just me effin around, just bein cocky and stuff, just a kind of fun song to do.

[bxx32]

Yeah I guessed you were just having a good time with this song and it turned out really good! But I was saying if you were trying to do this for real,and change up the lyrics some, it could be a real hit, and yeah the quality of the mic could be better too, but the most important in this case was you had a good time doing it and are happy with it. Don't worry about my small technical suggestions. By The Way, I'm still blown away by the instrumental!

[renschen21]

hey no prob man, i like the critiques.

here's a song where i really just devoted it to lyrics of mine, it's in my other thread, lemme know what u think about that
My newest song bout my twin bro who died....

[paulwalshmusic]

There is a loud low frequency hum clearly audible at the begining and probably all the way through that I feel muddies the overall sound.
Vocal performance is good, is the background vocal a sample?
Agree with Bxx32 about the sound quality of the vocal, maybe the microphone, maybe sort it with compression and eq.It lacks clarity and sounds a bit muffled.

good performance, well done


paul

[edub357]

The beat is a beast! I would agree and say that if you were going to put this out tough'n up the verses and smash that beat! im diggin the hook! good work!