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Old 08-17-2009, 08:08 PM
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I would put a de esser on the track. its been awhile since i heard a track that the beat dropped in after 1 min.13! a change from the norm is good.
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it reminds me of a japanese hip-hop group M-flo track from their album Expo Expo.

i feel that it needs a more upbeat sample when the 'melody' changes in the middle. changing that part might give it a bit more contrasting dynamics.
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I like this track a lot. sounds like some MC Paul Barman at times. The noise you have for the snare sound drove me crazy after a while though. I would like to hear a hand clap in there instead of the wood hit. maybe layer some kind of sample underneath everything so it doesn't sound so hollow. Over all though I really like the track, the flow is nice.

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thanks for the feedback guys!! I'll try my best to take everything and implement it to make the track that much better
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keep at it man. the song sounds good.
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