I try

[glenlata]

haha my wife asked me to post this one cause she mixed it awhile back and wants to know how her skills measure up. i told her it was ok but she doesn't believe me, when i was teaching her she was happy, now she thinks she knows something and i'm an idiot but what ever.

[nykoteen]

This really hits CLOSE to an industry standard I feel. The vocals could be cleaned up some, I hear some resonance or is that just dead noise, I don't know if there is a difference.

I don't feel the vocals are too loud, and they blend well with the beat with me. Lyrically and Musically I am really feeling this. Good job you earned a spot in my CD deck in my car.

[glenlata]

thanks alot man, i love this song myself, it does need a NR or a gate or something put on it, i got side tracked by another project and my wife started watching that damn tyra banks model stuff and we just forgot about it till you said something and i listened to it again.

[paul999]

There or some odd clicks and pops for sure. The crackling kick is cool put the rest feel lo-fi. Good vocal performance. I would try to get them a bit more forward in the mids so that they sound more in your face. I find the chorus hard to understand. I would compress them more as well. Over all this is a fantastic job though.

[glenlata]

any others

[edub357]

p irv is in da buildin wit this one! well ur wife is in the buildin wit this one lmao! im really fellin this track, for me the snare is overpowering but im listening with ear buds, other that that there is some clicking and a little tweaking here and there but it is definetly right there! great work, i see your a great teacher! damn that tyra banks lmao

[ap1325]

In my cheap headphones your snare (or is it a clap?) sounds too loud. Hope that helps any how.