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Old 11-07-2009, 08:15 PM
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Whatcha think? Thank God For Reason =]
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Old 11-09-2009, 04:23 AM
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The sonic quality is very good. I like your choices of drums and synth.

The beats have a spacious hiphop quality that I like.

The problem is that the song sounds unfinished. It sounds like you wrote and recorded it over the weekend.

Is this a skeletal demo that you intend to decorate with additional overdubs? Or is this the finished product?
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I can't figure out what is missing?
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Oh NVM that's not the finished product I'm sorry

THIS IS.

Is something still missing?
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Oh NVM that's not the finished product I'm sorry

THIS IS.

Is something still missing?
this is much better, it has more structure to it. but id watch the transition between instruments. the synths drop out during a part and it left me hanging for a split second until the drums kicked in. overall the ghetto mozart is a beast, the synths are murder i shouldve thought of that damit lol. remember to have a nice transition between intro, verse, hook, bridge etc. it was hard for me to find where the hook was. good work nykoteen i see u did get reason at the crib! enjoy
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yeah i'm trying to work on the structure better i notice everything you said edub, i kinda like that occasional pause on the synth, it matches how the song fits in my head, nice choppy new style, but I do need to make the intro verse and hooks stand out better,

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yeah i'm trying to work on the structure better i notice everything you said edub, i kinda like that occasional pause on the synth, it matches how the song fits in my head, nice choppy new style, but I do need to make the intro verse and hooks stand out better,

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lol yeah like i said i like the synths, how did u get that sound did u layer different synths together? yeah that choppy sound is hot wit out a doubt, whens that mix tape dropping? do u have a facebook or myspace? if so email me ur name so i can find u, edub357@hotmail.com
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reminds me of the nas joint, i know i can be what i wanna be, if i work hard at it, lol i like it don't think that anything is missing, seems like the synths could be turned down a tad they just kinda explode in outta no where which isn't really a problem, but the are kinda loud.
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