big musty mae

[cptfiasco]

this is a song I made for a guy I work with, he is about 63 yrs. years young and still much the pimp,and has lots of gold in his mouth. This is more or less a comical insight.I hope the tracks sound good to you to, any feedback welcomed.

[edub357]

Originally Posted by cptfiasco

this is a song I made for a guy I work with, he is about 63 yrs. years young and still much the pimp,and has lots of gold in his mouth. This is more or less a comical insight.I hope the tracks sound good to you to, any feedback welcomed.

your going to have to bring the vocals up front so we can hear what your saying bro!

[glenlata]

yeah like edub said i can't hear a word your saying, sounds muffled so maybe a high end boost or a low end cut might help it, but i cant understand anything. the beat sounds muddy and muffled as well.

[cptfiasco]

well your not missing much anyways(vocals).The sound of the beat is "muffled" for a reason.I laid distorded synth's on top of the rouned bass parts, also fuzzed out rythmic entities.I was going for an edged electronic feel.The kick supplied the low end,where the bass was cut at 125hz.,peaked slightly at 250 hz and 900hz(great response on small speakers). all the distorted synth's were(all 7) cutoff around 250, and the highs around 5500khz.(wanted a dark tone)The vocals(heavy distortion on them) laid down because of my unsureness of my voice. ...I may return to this at some point, Thank you both for the feedback and your time

[edub357]

by your original post this is suppossed to be a comical flow for an ol school pimp! so lets get som funky horns in there drop the dark synths and clean up the vox so we can hear you mock this dude!

[cptfiasco]

That is so true, I will have to redo it. It is not like I want to make fun of him, but just give him something to laugh at. redoing this will probably be more than doing the thanksgiving day song . Thanks Edub for the insight

[edub357]

just my 2 cents brother!