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Old 08-01-2009, 04:06 PM
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Any suggestions, opinions, advice on this song/recording/production are greatly appreciated.

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Old 08-02-2009, 03:16 AM
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The vocals and instrumental each sound fine; however, they don't go well together. The vocals sound way too big for the instrumental. Try less vocal layers, and a more powerful instrumental.
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Cool! Thanks for the advice DJ2ARON....I layered quite a bit. I'll try that and repost the new mix....I appreciate your advice.
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I really like the idea, but the delivery of the rap could have more omph if you know what I mean. And I argee with DJ2ARON, the instrumental is really not the right one for this. You need more of a club feel and not so much like a keyboard riff. If you work on both the aspects of the vocal and instrumental, you'll have a really HOT track!
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Cool everyone! I will try some of that....yeah I can here how the rap needs more oomph! And after taking a couple of listenings I can see about the instrumental keyboard part....I'm going to try some different voicings and soft sythns to see if I can find a better suited sound. I'll post the next mix in a couple of days! Thanks for the suggestions!
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