Bash this r&b and rap combo

[kiksnmusic5019]

July _ Dont take shit literally (DRAFT)

Please bash i think it has the vintage feel to it but a nice flow
theres some reverb panning
6 tracks total
4 of which were vocals
compression etc.

let me know how it works out or if it doesnt

thanks

[frosty976]

I like the vinyl on the rhythm. i think its just lacking something moving on the low end (maybe a bass hitting on the 1/2 or 1/4 notes).

Definitely has that old Outkast vibe.

[galexanders01]

i like dwele on this track and I'm sorry 2 say that this song is boring. u have a nice voice but its putting me 2 sleep. I give u a 6.

[kiksnmusic5019]

ur obviously a dude...this was meant for the females im not rappin to u

[bxx32]

Yeah it's to slow-maybe try to take it up a bit-it would be much more interesting dude, but i like the thing about the f***ing four leaf clover at the end.

[blahhh]

i think it just needs more energy/delivery...it sounds more like your talking

[kiksnmusic5019]

more energy would kill the vibe of the track dont u think? meant it to be more poetic than anything else i'll repost a second draft thanks guys

[JWales]

Yeah more energy would kill the vibe, maybe a thicker bass something growling. Overall its nice!

[danp29]

dude. i love this track. got any other stuff? id like to check it out.

[renschen21]

very good, but like others have said, a bit boringish. but you are definitely good lyrically