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Old 06-14-2009, 05:16 PM
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So...what do you think?

This is the first time i have uploaded any of my compositions but i think it could be better so constructive criticism is appreciated from those of you with more knowledge than me, and who are listening to it with fresh ears.

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Old 06-14-2009, 09:39 PM
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You have to work on your levels. 52 seconds (keyboard swells) in and at the 1.42 with the vocal aahhs you have extreme clipping. Keep an eye on those levels. Also make sure you're not running to hot into your interface.
You have a good idea. You may want to break it up a little so it doesn't keep on repeating.
Hope all is well.

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I'm thinking some long reverb on the claps as well as watching the clipping. Sounds really nice otherwise though.
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thanks guys much appreciated
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loving the deep bass man, but it could run faster for sure
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