Bash my mixdown on this track plz!!

[Artillakamr456]

jus a sample of my mixdown,this is a chorus of a song im workin on and i want to kno how my mix sounds to you guys and what i can do to improve it,thanks!

[frshtrx]

nice intro
then the bell synth on the right side is just a bit "piercing"...(I'm at low/mid volume, listening on KRK5s) , maybe knock the top off the Eq there?
same with that effected rip in front of the vocals, it's such a break from the intro that would grab your attention even more faded... or volume from bottom back up to create a break point or pause ?
nice rap delivery, cool ly'cs ; I dig it. really nice mix.

[Artillakamr456]

thanks man that helped,any other advice?

[bxx32]

WOW! This sounds like a Real Rap song-Should be on the radio when it's finished

[paulwalshmusic]

Very good, best vocals i have heard out of the songs currently on this forum.

Maybe try and get the whole thing a little louder?

impressive stuff!

paul

[godmami804]

long chorus but I love it. u got a nice voice and I like the beat. the whole project needs 2 b louder but other than that rock on.

[edub357]

The beat is official but could use some lowereing on some instruments, the hook would be a beast if you would adlib it! keep it up!