UP THE ASS!!! some killa bluesy rock stuff

[irawan gani]

bash away people... in anyway you like it.

[garageband]

Too much organ at the front. And it's wrongish, also. Either the organ fills or the lead guitar - both becomes a mess. Also, watch out for fake-sounding organ riffs. Or rather riffs that remind us it's a fake organ. Save the organ entrance for later, like :56. All the action is in the left channel. Backing vocals are low and lost. The modulations are brave and inventive but don't come off very convincing. That transition at 2:00 brings the song to a halt. As long as this song is, I might hack down the form some to tighten up the overall feel. The vocal is pretty good, I might try to get it a hair fatter.

In summary, weird panning, slightly over-long, fairly poor organ playing.

[demonkingjj]

Really nice song. The singer is pretty good, and I like the laid back mix. I do agree with garageband about the organ playing and the panning, though. I would probably take out some organ melodies and let the lead guitar fill it out.

[irawan gani]

Originally Posted by garageband

Too much organ at the front. And it's wrongish, also. Either the organ fills or the lead guitar - both becomes a mess. Also, watch out for fake-sounding organ riffs. Or rather riffs that remind us it's a fake organ. Save the organ entrance for later, like :56. All the action is in the left channel. Backing vocals are low and lost. The modulations are brave and inventive but don't come off very convincing. That transition at 2:00 brings the song to a halt. As long as this song is, I might hack down the form some to tighten up the overall feel. The vocal is pretty good, I might try to get it a hair fatter.

In summary, weird panning, slightly over-long, fairly poor organ playing.

OUCH!!! that's a hard one...

FANTASTIC bash sir...

[irawan gani]

Originally Posted by demonkingjj

Really nice song. The singer is pretty good, and I like the laid back mix. I do agree with garageband about the organ playing and the panning, though. I would probably take out some organ melodies and let the lead guitar fill it out.

part of it is because i am TOO close to the song so my perspective have been really skewed and i didnt take time off from piecing the tracks together and mixing.

its one of my most personal songs yet about being apart being two continents and shit... yeah.. sorry about the gay ass shit...

[irawan gani]

alright dude....

organless versions of the song.

i thought i should give you one that has everything except organ and another one a threadbare version.

[garageband]

I have got the organ part done. I want to know how you want me to send the full sized file. Do you have a FTP?
I have a MP3 you can listen to in the meantime.
This version needs about 22 dB of gain.

[irawan gani]

mate. that sounds fantastic. nice riffs. no make that KILLA riffs. FINALLY a natural sounding riff... more than what i can concoct.

you could send it via, yousendit or megaupload.

ive got a megaupload account that you could upload to. i will PM the username and password.

[garageband]

Glad you liked it. I didn't realized how rusty I was until I sat down to do it this weekend. Will upload soon.