Re: Typical
Intro guitar tone sounds thin and played a little loose. I would be hesitant to keep it - trying to get a better sound at the amp. If that track is what you're stuck with, some kind of tape emulation or tube emulation could help. It needs some harmonic distortion.
I agree with sosahoi that the drums are muddy. Depending on how the drums were tracked, I would try cutting a lot of low-mids and high pass filtering most channels but the kick. I think the kit could come more forward in the mix as well. It's somewhat a taste thing, but compared to most songs in this genre, they are pretty far back. Maybe bringing the electrics down would be a better route. Then the bass will come through more as well (bass is also on the tubby side - cut some low mids, maybe add a little distortion type plugin, lightly. You may also want to do some editing to tighten the bass up with the rest of the band) If you listen to commercially released songs, it's mainly about the vocal, then the drums (this is changing a little with indie, but true for the most part).
Speaking of that, you may be chasing your tail by trying to mix without the vocal. There are a few things you can do, but so many mix decisions are dependent on the vocal. I would recommend getting the final vocal before you start making any important mix decisions.
And the clips, as sosahoi wrote, on the right panned guitar definitely need to go.
Look forward to hearing the song with the vocal.
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