My second try on this second

[topsoul182]

This is my second attempt at mixing this song

Bash away

[PeterSimonRussell]

I'm not sure I have a clear idea of what you are trying to achieve.
The recordings are quite clean and clear and as the mix, I hear everything. But its just not sort of blending together.
The sung vocals must be in tune for me - they just spoil the whole song.
The dissorgansied and dissonant start I like.
The Troll vocals are fine.
Quiet interlude is OK, if a little too chourusssss.
The sung vocal bit 1:41 should blast in like an epic classic rock band on speed but fails to achieve this.
It then goes on and on with three different sections until we are treated to more unsung vocal torture.
I listenned to it about 6 times, while there are some good ideas, it still don't connect
Sorry,

[topsoul182]

Originally Posted by PeterSimonRussell

I'm not sure I have a clear idea of what you are trying to achieve.
The recordings are quite clean and clear and as the mix, I hear everything. But its just not sort of blending together.
The sung vocals must be in tune for me - they just spoil the whole song.
The dissorgansied and dissonant start I like.
The Troll vocals are fine.
Quiet interlude is OK, if a little too chourusssss.
The sung vocal bit 1:41 should blast in like an epic classic rock band on speed but fails to achieve this.
It then goes on and on with three different sections until we are treated to more unsung vocal torture.
I listenned to it about 6 times, while there are some good ideas, it still don't connect
Sorry,

I didnt write or perform the song, my buddy wrote it after an inspiration after going to warped tour

i was just asking for opinions on the mix because ive been at it for a couple months and im just tryin to make further the quality