Bash My New Track

[Adam1423]

Hi guys here's my new track. Its semi finished (as in i want you guys to help me tack it to the next lvl production wise), i'm aware of some timing issues in it. I haven't been as fussy with the final takes as i usually am because i wanted to work on my production skills, if that makes sense (and didn't want to piss around tracking guitars for week lol) i'm more after comments on the production than on the song writing but if you have something you particularly wanna say fire away.

cheers guys.

[children]

in my opinion
if Adam1423 mixing
guitar lines maybe increase reverb little bit
kick ,muted guitar and bass are masking
in this genre kick and snare are important
Adam1423 can eq kick in range hi-fre (3-6 khz)
snare it's dry add some reverb
OVerhead sound qaulity is good i like it
it's cleary
this is my opinion maybe you don't like my review ..
so sorry ^-^ i'm just newbie
you can review my cover song my mixing (i don't love u cover)

[Vulconizer]

Guitars need to be high-shelved a bit, imo.

Knock off like 3 or 4db and bring the shelf down to around 6.3k or so. See if that helps them a bit.