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Old 08-19-2009, 09:12 PM
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Hey, this is a part of a song that I wrote really quick today. Just wanted to see if you guys had any suggestions. Thanks
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Old 09-04-2009, 09:53 PM
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i like this song, where youve stopped it bring in a bridge right there, something like

dont you run a-way from me-
cuz I still need your com-pany-
cuz with out it im just half of me-
so dont you run a-way from me-

id start in @ 1:10

just a quick 4 bar bridge or it can be a hook. take it as a welcome to the site free bee

I actually like where your going with this song and by what your saying you can go so many ways with it. let me know if this helps you get over your writing curve.
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