Sober No More

[JCollins23]

Please let me know what you think - good or bad! Thanks!

[Verse 1:]
Baby, baby way back when
You and me, were inseparable
We were supposed to be together til the end
Now my dreams are irreparable

Cause when you disappeared into the horizon
My heart was drunk with despair
I was praying to myself this wasn’t the right thing
Please wake me from this nightmare

[Pre Chorus:]
I'll never be addicted to them, the way I was addicted to you
You don't even realize, the things you put me through
It really is a miracle I'm breathing and still alive
And that's no thanks to you

[Chorus:]
Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
I guess that's what I get for believing
You would never walk out, walk out my door

Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
I guess that's what I get for believing
You would never walk out, walk out my door

[Verse 2:]

You were my best friend, you were my lady
And my love for you spiraled out of control
I would have done anything for you, my baby
You're absence has swallowed me whole

We were supposed to say I do, side by side
But now all I’m married to is this bottle
You were the only drug that, got me high
And now I'm drowning in my sorrow

[Pre Chorus:]
I'll never be addicted to them, the way I was addicted to you
You don't even realize, the things you put me through
It really is a miracle I'm breathing and still alive
And that's no thanks to you

[Chorus:]
Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
I guess that's what I get for believing
You would never walk out, walk out my door

Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
I guess that's what I get for believing
You would never walk out, walk out my door

[Bridge:]
Now baby, drink that
So, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so
So, drink that
So, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so

Now baby, drink that
So, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so
So, now drink that
So, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so

[Chorus:]
Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
I guess that's what I get for believing
You would never walk out, walk out my door

Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
I guess that's what I get for believing
You would never walk out, walk out my door

[jamort]

I would love to record any ogf the songs that I've read that you wrote if you were to put real good melodies and get your name out there I believe you would eventually have a major label take you songs the one thing I have noticed is that your songs seem to have a hook but to me this is personal opinion the hook is not strong enough.... Um i wrote a song like this and my chorus was

When my alchohal level changes -------
I do to -------- These two lines gets peoples attention
I got no wife
she took my kids
What the hell am I supposed to do ------- and this gives it a nice and smoooth ending
I believe you are trying to write country but if not whatever genre your trying to write you seem to be pretty seasoned.... and good luck I'm also going to post some other things on your other songs too

[jamort]

one more thing
[Chorus:]
Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
I guess that's what I get for believing
You would never walk out, walk out my door

your chorus is good you can stick with it

Cause baby girl, oh, you're the reason why I’m drinking
I don't wanna be sober, be sober no more
and I guess thats why I'm watching everything
I love walk out my door

either way its good and keep up the good work