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Old 05-28-2008, 04:33 AM
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Default I Wrote this Song To help Me.

I Have Been A Struggling Chirstian For Ages. And I Would Like To Talk This Moment To say. I AM NOT BRINGING RELIGION INTO THE FORUM. I Am Simply Telling You Why I Wrote This Song. So i Had This Dream Where i Was Dying, And when I Did I Saw "God" Walk Away From Me. So I Was Litteraly Floating In Black. And I Could See The family i Had Through That Darkness Some how. And This is The Result of It.

What Is Left When Im Alone? This Empty Space No Longer Home? Join The Stars When I Pass. they Told Me That I Wouldnt Last.



Am I The Product Of NAtures Design? Destined For Silence And Losing My Mind? KIss My Mind With One Las Thought. And Join The Stars Still Burning Hot.



When I Was A Child I Came From The Black, And Now That Im Older I Know Ill Go Back. Where Is The God They Told Me There Was? It All Should Be Clear Instead Of This Fuzz.

BUt I Know I Will Out Liove Time. Through Thoughts And Pictures In You Mind. And Whilst My Body Lays There Cold, You Story's There, It Still Unfolds. And Maybe When Your story Ends. You And I Will Meet Again.



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You Will Hold The Children, While I Embrace The Dark, You Will know Im With You, My Loves Still In Your Heart.

And If The ****th I Leave Behind, Seems To Stray as Time Goes By. Let A God Not Haunt The Sky. I Beg That My Conciousness Will Die.



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why is **** Starred Out?
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cuz the word **** is banned on the forum. see Law #1 - W A R M is BANNED!
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Nice.

Could do with t abit of work:
Where Is The God They Told Me There Was? It All Should Be Clear Instead Of This Fuzz.

To maybe:
Where Is The God They Told Me Was There? Why is It fuzzy when it should Be Clear.

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I like it, thumbs up mate
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