I like this one a lot. The first verse sounds great. The snare kind of threw me off at first. The attack on it feels a little funky, kind of like the attack was compressed out of it then added back in with a transient control. It has a slight tick at the beginning. I stop noticing it after the first verse though. The delays/choruses/fx etc sound like they are all in good taste, though a couple dB louder than I would have done them, but I tend to do my stuff pretty dry.
The cello track sounds like it's lagging. Not sure why.