I hate to be overly critical of this one man, because honestly, I think you did a killer job. It is OBVIOUS that you put a ton of work and thought into this, and overall one of the better submissions on here. The one thing that stood out to me though (and I had a really hard time getting over it) was that whoosh sound that was with the drums right from the start. Once things get going, it just hangs in there like white noise or something and was super distracting to me like a radio station that just isnt quite tuned in all the way. If not for that, I really think it would've been in my top 2, but it's still way up there in my book. Great job!