Tolo - Still Falling...

[tolo]

Hey everybody...

Hope all is well. Here is a tune I wrote to celebrate the 49 year long love of my in laws. Call me sentimental - but I wanted to give them something unique and just for them... But don't let it stop you being brutal!!

Keep well folks,

Tony.

[awaken1]

Wow, this is very beautiful to listen to. Other then the reverb seeming a little thick at times it's really nice..I really like the 4 notes you chose at 0:54 and then repeated..perfect example right there how just little things can really do a lot! almost has kind of a "Momentary Lapse of Reason" feel to it..Thanks for sharing.

[fHumble fHingaz]

Sweet instrumental! I see you've put your own twist on The Shadows-type thing - very well done - nice composition... The only thing I would change is the drum sound. Might be a personal taste thing, but to me they sound a bit "smacky" for this type of tune, especially the kick. Good stuff, as usual.

[Vulconizer]

Well written, captured, and mixed.

What I would like to hear from it is just a little more thump from the kick.
Take a touch of the reverb away from the kick. It will clear it up. It only needs a little taken away though, in my opinion. You might also need to give it a couple of extra db @ 63hz or so. Pull a little of the "click" out of the kick if needed after that.

Snare needs a little boost around 120hz to fatten it up.

I like the reverb and delay on the lead. It gives me the impetus to try really playing with some huge verb sounds now.

Cool tune.

[Streamline]

hey this is awesome! i agree with the first poster, very late pink floyd-ish. reminds me of the bridge in high hopes. the production is very good but i have two comments. 1) the acoustic guitar would benefit being a tad dryer and higher in the mix - to me it just feels a bit cold and distant with so much reverb. and 2) i think the synth pad should have been much w armer. it has a very clinical, icy, computer synth feel to it. it would be awesome if it had a 60's/70's analog touch on it. but that's just opinion!

anyways, great job man i really like the song!

Liam