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Old 10-07-2009, 09:09 PM
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Hello everyone,

New tune - but something is not right. Is it the mix, the performances, the song itself?? I think I am too close to know - have been over and over and over it!! My ears are shot tonight....

Let me know folks - please bash away!!

Best, always,

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Another catchy pop nugget, as usual Tony. A few mix issues: There's a touch of overall harshness in the high midrange; The bass needs to come up in the mix; The vocal delay is emphasising some sibilance; The vocals & drums dominate the mix just a bit too much, so in turn that could be remedied by bringing the guitars up comparitively. The kick needs more low-end punch as well.
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Thanks chap. Agree with everything... I will work on it tomorrow!
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I like the song and also agree it's a bit heavy on high mids and highs for me. I think it's a bit heavy on the vocal delay...just a bit. I think the kick and bass guitar are not clearly defined and a little light overal for both of them. Good performances and I really like the tune! Very 80's and bit like Toto. Well done!!!!!
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