Hello, I'm listening on KRK Rokit 5s.
Intro sounds nice, no complaints there.
The kick could be a little more present in the overall mix, and the snare could use some more "body". Those are just part of my tastes though, and by body I don't mean more mid EQ I mean a longer tail, such as with parallel compression or extending the decay on a transient shaper. If that's not to your liking, it's probably fine the way it is.
Some of the cymbals are quiet and some are loud, if they're all on the same over head track, you may want to compress more or try some volume automation to get those a little more even.
Those are just my immediate thoughts after hearing it once. Nice job!