Pls Bash our NEW TUNE!!!! Want Input...

[dberry001]

Hey guys,
Just a year into our recording... My buddy and I (member Haazy34) wrote a tune for a girl friend of ours for her 40th birthday. BTW - we're only 21. HA!

Let us know what needs to be tweaked, adjusted or just taken out of the mix.

Any and all input will be appreciated.

Thanks dudes!

D and H

[dberry001]

Our friends name is Vivencia. What a cool name for a song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[bwareolrgedog]

well a little rough at the beginning, but i like it (:

[moneycat12]

don't like the guitar tone, it sounds too "cheap" (if that makes sense)

[demonsthatfall]

main rythm guitar might sound better if it was if it was a mic-ed(if it wasn't) acoustic guitar because it sounds like its ran direct which sounds pretty flat. leave the flange out. EQ a little more bass to your tracks to have a much more fuller sound. This thought could be optional depending on your taste in the song, drop down the gain a little on the lead guitar and try different reverb setting and see which best suites it. other than than melody is good and composition is cool.

[dberry001]

Originally Posted by demonsthatfall

main rythm guitar might sound better if it was if it was a mic-ed(if it wasn't) acoustic guitar because it sounds like its ran direct which sounds pretty flat.

Thanks for the feedback DTF. I've always ran my acoustics direct - mainly because that's all I've ever done live and just transferred that practice right into recording. But I agree with you and need to give 'micing it up' a try.

My buddy and I have a couple of XML990 we could try or his SM58. That is until we can get something different. We are both wanting an SM57. Either way - I appreciate you mentioning this and we'll have to try it out.