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Old 07-22-2008, 01:38 AM
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This is my first song post, It's a short instrumental. Let me know what you think.

I attached a slightly different mix. taking the advice of fellow members.
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Old 07-22-2008, 02:43 AM
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First post or first song? Nice and simple jam, I like it... I could noodle to that kind of thing for a while...
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The acoustic guitar is slightly out of tune.

The low end is undefinied. I feel like I should be hearing the kick drum much more clearly yet at the same time the bass could be louder. Wait a minute! That probably means you should try to pull the guitars down a bit. They are WAY out in front compared to the drums and bass.

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i agree with brandon... i think the kick is fine for this song, not sticking out too much but still there. but the lead guitar could prolly come down a bit.
nice song though.. i like it
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Thanks for the advice guys. I tried what you suggested. I took the lead guitar down, as well a the acoustic a little, and then brought the bass up a touch. The mix seems a little more solid now. Thanks again. It can be difficult to figure out what is wrong with a mix after listening to it so many times. You have been very helpfull
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Post the new clip if you want. We can keep on going with this. It's common when mixing to fix one problem and then 4 more pop up.

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I edited the thread and changed the attached file to the newer version. Do you think it's any better?
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Awesome - sounds like fun!
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The out of tune acoustic is still bugging me. This feels much better than I remember the other one sounding (I think!).

There is a spot where the bass falls out 0:32 or so. That can't happen. It's way too distracting for conveying anything with intensity.

This sounds pretty good to me.

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