New Song bash hard

[joner]

just finished this song the other night, pretty proud of it, wanted to see if anyone can give any criticism or advice as i might be missing things on my speakers and its always good to get a second opinion(Y)

Bash away
Mountain.mp3

[PeterSimonRussell]

Is the intro a bit long?
Lead vocals have PPP pop on them? 0:44 0:55 etc.
Is that someone kicking the mic stand at 1:20? There def. some LF noise there.
Main guitar sound is a bit on the dull side, I think I'd like to here the top strings sing out more brightly.
Not sure what the box(?) drum adds.
Bass may be too loud in the mix.

Nice song and performance. Liked it. Esp breathy vox bit before synth comes in.

[kimocentric]

Hello,

I suggest you tone down whatever dynamics processor you have on the guitar (the percussiveness of it is appealing, but it's too loud and squashed) and turn up the vocals & guitar solo.

The part with bass & electric (synth?) is really nice-- again, I would push up the vocals and electric guitar.

I like the song a lot. It reminds me of Elliott Smith.

[dberry001]

Can you post the mp3 using this sites functionality - versus a download?

Maybe it's just my computer or something.