Need Urgent Help

[Commerson]

The final of this song will be put up Sept. 15 for my cousin's birthday so I need help soon.

Please point out things that I should fix.
-EQ
-Compression
-Levels
-Etc.
Please help soon. I would appreciate it

-Thank You

[gg.gamble]

don't suppose you went to reading or leeds this year?

I liked it, did get a bit tedious though I would say streamline it, could add interest the easy way by modulating somewhere and play the same thing.
Drums are a little sloppy, the bass drum should definately be quantized, theres leeway with cymbals but not the bass drum.
The last verse sounds very copy and pasted in after the guitar eq sweep. I think it might actually be out of time.

If it was me i would sort out the clear sections to tidy it up and re-record. but thats me.

Have fun though its a nice song

[Commerson]

Thank you for your reply.

I didn't go to Reading this year But I have been watching some of it on Youtube.

I'll see what I can do with the song