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Old 09-08-2009, 11:54 PM
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Default Movin It Produced By Phorse - Phorse Feat. Prime 1

Sup,I just wanna see and listen to some feedback on one of my new tracks called "Movin It". I Produced and Engineered it. I also wrote and rapped my verses,hook and sang the bridge...Well Gimme Feedback Peeps

hopefully imeem lets you listen to all of it and not just the 30 secs

Phorse Ft. Prime 1 - Movin It Produced by Phorse - Free MP3 Stream on IMEEM Music
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Sounds great to me!

I especially like the unconventional drum loop. It works well.

My criticisms have to do with the harsh upper-midrange and the highs. The vocals sound a bit sibilant. The hi-hats are harsh too. This could be easily corrected using a de-esser on the vox and a dip of the 7-10kHz range on the hats.

The vocals could be a bit more animated an not so robotic sounding. I'd like to hear a bit more personality from such up-and-coming artists.

Harsh criticisms, but you'll hear them eventually. Overall, it sounds together to me. Iron out the details, and you could be onto something here....
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Sounds great to me!

I especially like the unconventional drum loop. It works well.

My criticisms have to do with the harsh upper-midrange and the highs. The vocals sound a bit sibilant. The hi-hats are harsh too. This could be easily corrected using a de-esser on the vox and a dip of the 7-10kHz range on the hats.

The vocals could be a bit more animated an not so robotic sounding. I'd like to hear a bit more personality from such up-and-coming artists.

Harsh criticisms, but you'll hear them eventually. Overall, it sounds together to me. Iron out the details, and you could be onto something here....
oh,what you mean loop?? lol
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