Mick Brady / The Troubles I've Never Had

[Mick Brady]

This is a spoof on the cliches that regularly crop up in country music. Any advice and suggestions would be appreciated.

[jjb]

Although I've "Never Been" a country singer, this sounds good to me. Quite clever! Two minor points. On the second round of things you've never had, there seem to be so many words the phrasing seems a bit awkward. And, at the end, would have expected a last chord hit ("dum de dum do do dum, DUM"). Enjoyed listening.

jjb

[Mick Brady]

Thanks JJB. I think you have a point about the phrasing. I've given it some thought and I have some alternative wordings which may work better. I hadn't thought of the extra "DUM" at the end but will put one in and see how it sounds. Thanks again