Jesse Nemitz / Never too Far

[admiraljdn]

Here's a song I co-wrote with a good friend of mine who needed this song for his wedding. I only wrote ONE line of the lyrics (ughhh they are terrible lol) but I did the music, melody, arrangement etc.

We were going for a secondhand serenade pop thing. Feedback is greatly appreciated. It's my third full song I've produced. Thanks everyone.

[eamon7]

a couple things. I'm not sure what the booming thing was in the 1st verse. sounded like boom with reverb. clean that up. the snare could use a tiny bit more snap so it stands out a bit more and then put your kick and snare dead center in the mix. they were going back and forth in my speakers and it was distracting and even annoying and distracting me from your excellent lead vocal.. otherwise i think you did a great job on this. well played, well written and sang. other than the things i pointed out i think it sounds great

[admiraljdn]

thanks for the input eamon. I will touch up the booms and also work out the kick and snare. thanks so much for listening and your positive comments!

[digdog]

Listen . I liked this song .... But liked nothning about this take ...I thing you need a different approach ....
Start again this time ...Pure accostic ...no tech stuff .. acc. guitar & grand piano Go pure , Breathy . Personal...Touch there heart ....Nice Beatuiful song ....Make it **** ,,even Hot ..