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Old 04-09-2009, 04:23 AM
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they played your games, and failed to see beyond your face
demand their faith,forget that im your fail
there is nothing but stains , blooming your name
are you awake? you know ill beg for you

im so lost , your empty, but i forgot
your so cold, i am as well, but i saw god

you came to glow my friend,and said i need you once again,
i dont belong to them, ill stay in my head,
through night and day , your preach your way,
before you do get in, lets hear you say...

im so lost your empty, but i forgot, your so cold i am as well, but i saw god
i saw god...i feel her i see her through me
i saw god, i see him i feel him though me...

im so lost your empty, but i forgot..
your so cold, i am as well, but i saw god,
im so cold, your empty
but i forgot
your so lost, i am as well, but i saw god
but i saw god
i cant forget
i wish you were you
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i like your voice. i like your guitar playing. i like the composition. not crazy about the lyrics as a "read" but the seem ok sonicly. i like echo that comes in at 1:21. i like that way you play with the mix inserting effects that come in maybe only once and are gone.

this sounds like a beginner recording with a lot of potetial. i'd like to hear you in 6 months. but don't wait that long. : )

one thing i'm not sure of and i don't want to offend.

was this comedy ? or angst ? if it was comedy, it's pretty good, but comedy is a limiting field. if it's angst, i think you're on the right track. you'll get tighter and, your "pieces" (of the mix) will lock tighter as you get more experience. pieces being parts of the song.

i really like your voice. try to stay in the pocket more - find out where you sound good and try not to over-reach your abilities. find what you do good and shine a light on it. the things that you don't do good - leave it in the shadows.

do what works.

i likes.

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haha no comedy intended i suppose it is closer to angst ,recorded with a 57 directly to my interface, (i bought a new fancy pre amp and a good mic, but haven-t felt the need to use-em quite yet but i will be sure !, a real super fast mix, maybe it took me an hour to mix it (not much to mix) and it-s mono

i really apreciate your comments , i-m still trying to find my own singing style, so i-m still experimenting ,sometimes it sounds like shit, sometimes something really cool comes out

thank you once again

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you the man !

glad it's angst. i like that it sounds like acoustic metal with a much bigger pallette. lots of melody in the guitar and your voice is very deep and unique and different. WORK IT !
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