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Old 07-22-2008, 01:28 PM
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hey guys,

my name is michael, i am 19 years old and i come from germany. i would like to introduce you 2 songs which i have made by my own. the first one is called ''The End Of The World'' (hard rock style) and the second is called ''Kommen Und Gehen'' (english: Coming and Leaving - Jazz, Chill out style). you can hear the songs if you click on this link here: MyOwnMusic.de - Artistseite von MEW
it would also be great if you could post your comment here to know what can be improved. i am looking forward to your answers.

p.s.: if you don't know where to find the songs because my artist homepage is full of german, then i can help you. if you scroll down, you will see a word called discographie. below this word you can find my 2 songs. then you just have to click on one and a new window will pop up. in this new window you need to click on lo- or hi- preview, however you want. after that you should be able to hear the song.

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Old 07-22-2008, 06:57 PM
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I love the second one, great sound. On the first one (the heavier one), I generally like to hear a little more in the highs. If I were listening to it in my car I would have turned my treble up a little to compensate, but thats just me, I like a little more treble in a heavier song like that.
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Old 07-23-2008, 12:50 AM
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Kommen und Gehen is a wonderful track. I like the rawness on this one. Refined just enough. Nice progression and the solo spots a real treat.
Did you use that Strat on this? I see it has a pickup on it.
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Old 07-23-2008, 01:07 AM
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the second one is great. keep that up for sure. i'm not too into the heavier stuff like the first track but their is something weird about it. it maybe be needing a boost in the highs. i'm not that great at picking out stuff like that but i agree about turning the treble up in my car on it.
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Michael, I really like the second tune. You're a sensitive and obviously talented musician and it is reflected in the intimacy of your playing. It is also a nice recording. When listening I thought how great it would be to hear a fretless bass in the mix. I'm sure you would excel at it. Melody and harmonic depth may not be as glamorous as in your face walls of distorted speed guitar, but over time I think you might find it much more satisfying.

All that blazing lead guitar work in the rock piece would have stood out much better if the underlying 16th note drum/bass/guitar passages were more distinct and precise.

Keep up the good work!
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hey guys

it is me again. thank you for your comments. i will definitely try to improve my songs as fast as possible. if you want, then you can hear another song of me. it is called ''Crazy Dance'' and it belongs to the style rock. here is the link where you can download it:
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hey guys

it is me again. thank you for your comments. i will definitely try to improve my songs as fast as possible. if you want, then you can hear another song of me. it is called ''Crazy Dance'' and it belongs to the style rock. here is the link where you can download it: YouSendIt - Send large files - transfer delivery - FTP Replacement

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sry for double post ^^;
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Dude,
Sounds great. While the hard rock is a little harder than I'm used to, you have great talent and ability! As with anyone who does their own mixing, you just have to do your best. Sometimes it helps to record and then let it be for a while, come back to it with a fresh set of ears. The acoustic tune, very melodic and soothing. Decent mix. If you are trying for the perfect mix, hire a professional. That's why they make the big bucks!

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Old 07-31-2008, 01:29 PM
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hey guys

i want to thank you for your answers. i am glad to hear that you like my songs. as you know, i have already recorded and posted a song called ''The End Of Our World''. but in my opinion there were some things which had to be fixed, so i would like to present you the improved version. if you click on the link below, you will be able to download it. here is the link: https://www.yousendit.com/download/Q...YUl0Ni92Wmc9PQ

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