i like the tune, but i would definitely bring the vocal up a bit in the verse, maybe give it some more high end. maybe try compressing the drums a bit less as well. if you're going for that kinda psychedelic indie rock thing, i might compress the whole mix to taste, tweak the eq on the kick so it's not as boomy, and bring the bass out a little more. there's my 2 cents--hope it helps--

