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Old 09-24-2009, 12:12 PM
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I'm interested in positive and negative criticism on this one.
Its still in a stage where i can change it.

Thanks guys

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Old 09-25-2009, 12:35 AM
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Are you looking for comments on production or just song writing? I think in terms of production it has a way to go. It's rhythmically loose and in some places seems a little tentative.

In terms of song writing and arrangement concept, it's another Charlie Lang winner. Fantastic chord choices, pleasant melody and lyrics, and great backing lines.

Huge potential as always.
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Old 09-25-2009, 04:22 AM
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Yeah its loose, for sure. I'll totally redo it, but it does feel good. Thanks Richie.
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