Bash this mix!! Kill it lol!! All of you!!

[Vortex4001]

This is another mix I did .....tell me what you think... any type of feedback will be credited to making me better....thats what im looking to do..always.

Bash it if necessary.

[crazyfloridaman]

Piano is too soft and midrangey. Effects are a little heavy. Vocals are a little pitchy. Nice tune though.

[RicciTunes]

I agree with the first reply. You might consider light reverb instead of the delay on the vocals. This will reel it in and give a more intimate feel. The singer has great tone and phrasing and the song has a lot of potential. Consider bringing in more instrumentation after the first verse to notch it up.

[jpierre]

yea a nice reverb would be nice instead.. she also goes off tune a bit.. but seeing its only the piano the piano should be fatter and a little louder to support the vocals.. too much space in between .. sounds like the piano is following her instead of blending together...

[jpierre]

thats some nice lyrics though.. this could be a much better track if u take the time and arrange the instrumentation and get her vocal in the correct key throughout the song...

[Vortex4001]

I appreciate all of your comments....and yes.... this is actually the second mix I did to this song...i'll upload the first mix I did soon....btw...I really like this forum a entire onslaught of honesty is what makes us better.