For my tastes the guitars are a bit bright.
Iíd like to hear more weight in the drums. The kick to me could use more low end. The snare and kick could both some up in volume. For example at 2:26 the snare really pops out. The rest of the time its pretty buried.
I like the levels on everything else.
Thatís about all I can say. Iím pretty noob-ish too.