We are already off to a good start!
The bass cut out for a second. That was distracting.
I feel like I'm gonna have gunfight with Clint Eastwood. Okay, nevermind.
Well shit! I really liked where this song was going. I was expecting a gigantic kind of "In The Air Tonight" fill and some kind of explosion chorus.
I really like the bass on this one. It may be a bit beefy, but I like what it does to the song. I feel like something really big is about to happen.
So, you are not done. Not in my opinion anyway. Add a create big chorus.
Brandon