Thanks for the input. i changed a few more things and i think my latest mix is a bit better. ill take the bass down a bit, its hard to mix it properly when you have two computer speakers and a sub lol but its going pretty good.
so im up to my fourth mix. i actually posted it over in bash this recording.
...ill just find the link,,
HERE IT IS
i would upload it here but ive used my monthly bandwidth and my internet has been slowed down a lot.
thanks for listening and commenting
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MY GEAR

1x Presonus Firestudio
3x Shure SM57
1x Shure BETA 52a
2x Legacy AXIS1 Small Diaphragm Condensors [To be upgraded to Rode M3 microphones soon]
Thats all for now... BUt i do have Pretty bad GAS at the moment